Take Back the Skies
By Lucy Saxon
Catherine Hunter is the daughter of a senior government
official in Anglya meaning she is privileged, however she longs to escape the
confines of her life before her father can marry her off. So, Cat stows away on
the ship the Stormdancer hoping to get away.
For 19 years old, Lucy Saxons first book is pretty good. She
certainly has a lot of potential talent which I’m sure will improve as she
writes more.
The plot of TBTS is fairly good, it has a dystopian
‘overthrow a terrible government’ feel to it but different and in a completely
new world. However, at the start of the book, Cat’s objective is to escape her
life, but we don’t get enough detail on it to know exactly what she’s escaping
from- she dislikes her father, but doesn’t every teenager at some point and her
mother still lives and she’s ill,
doesn’t she mind abandoning her? I felt it needed more on her father cruel
behaviour so that she felt forced to leave rather than seemingly like a stroppy
runaway teen.
After Cat leaves there is too big a gap in the plot where
nothing really happens. She just lives happily on the Stormdancer with nothing
building in the background and you wonder what the rest of the story is going
to be about. It leaves you bored just waiting for the plot to pick up.
Once things do pick up, sometimes you’re left thinking, really? The main characters have snuck
in to a secret government building and to avoid being caught hide in a
cupboard, where they begin talking. Surely, they couldn’t be at all surprised
when they’re shortly after discovered and hauled out.
The characters I think could’ve been better developed with
more stand out individual characteristics, you had the stereotypical enigmatic
male with a dark past he doesn’t wish to speak of. He didn’t seem in anyway
different to past heroes. The heroine was a usual stubborn girl wanting to
escape her life and finds herself falling in love with the first boy she
encounters.
The language used seemed unnatural and forced almost. The
dialogue just didn’t flow but seemed disjointed; it needed to be more
conversational.
The world building was good; Lucy has built an odd and new
world with hopefully opportunity for later books set in it. It was easy to slip
into the world and imagine it and want to be aboard the Stormdancer.
The end of the book I feel isn’t satisfying, you’re left
hanging and angry that the end just isn’t nice. After finishing, I liked that
the end was different and sort of angered me because it made it stand out but I
felt saddened by it in an already quite dark book. It didn’t change and end
lightly, which was surprising.
Overall, I’d give this book 2 stars out of 5.